Re: Voyage by James Daniels
The scoffers said that it couldn't be done,And the odds were so great, who wouldn't?But I tackled that job that couldn't be done,And whaddaya know, it couldn't.(Anon)
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(1) White (grey) space between the lines is annoying.(2) This really is no good as a poem.(3) If the speaker is about to exeunt stage left by his own hand, is there any point to the last line?(4)...
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I'm not trying to be rude, so thank you for your words of critique. You are entitled to your opinion and I expected there to be many like you.....too bad you won't stop what I have in the...
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I guess there's some history here that I don't recall, but let me give you the courtesy of explaining why I think this poem is problematic. First, although I see an increasing number of poems with...
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"White (grey) space between the lines is annoying."They're called stanza breaks, pal. It's part of poetry.
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The poem has been edited.The origional post had stanza breaks between every line.Which is definately annoying.And i`m not your pal.
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